I'm special!

by Amanda   Jan 7, 2006


Dying inside,
coping no more,
Out of breath,
fall to the floor,

Trying my best,
to get to my feet,
I am so lonely,
here on my street,

My family abuse me,
and life is so hard,
When I was born,
I got the wrong card,

God gave me this life,
the way it is now - bad,
To see if I can make it,
through happy and sad,

So much has happened,
so much got in my way,
I believe I am special,
because I made it today.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

I've had a pretty awful life and i am still here - I made it!

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  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerful poem with clear strong emotions

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda,
    Dearheart, you have made it......and I'm proud of you....If you'll always just take a look around there's always someone that has it worst than we do...so be thankful....I got faith in you, you're an intelligent young woman and you'll be fine...Thanks for those sweet and kind words that you said....Always know I love you and I'm here if you need me....

    Love ya bunches, Ann

  • 19 years ago

    by Little Dot

    There is so much emotion in this poem you did a wonderful job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa

    Great poem, it's written with so much strength, love it! Great job!

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