When i read this poem, i got such a clear picture in my head. it was wonderful. this poem seems to really captyre a moment. i loved it

Ruby

I loved it. it was great. beautiful. i am at a lost of words.
Emma 5/5

I really like this poem you put an image in my head...I gave it a five. Keep on writing I really love your style. =)

Wow this is a great poem i loved it excellent job
5/5
love always
tabby

So detailed and emotional it was such a beoutiful peice of work! I really liked this poem the most from yours so far!

Thanks for you c/r

-Josiah

Ha, I laughed at this poem at first only because I have one by the same title. That always entertains me when I share the same title as another author. However this version is ten times better than my own. Another tale of blood and pain, the tragedy of our world unfolds, that so many who have the give to live want to take it away. Nice poem, it give me a lot to think about.

-Tainted Mikochan

It's good. I liked it. You spelled a word in the second stanza wrong though if you wanted to fix that. Emotion ran threw the poem and still kept the flow very well I believe. Keep up the wonderful work

~Juls~

I liked this one alot, Its abit like my poem called "Past the ceiling" You should read it someday, If you wanna. But you did a great job on this one too, Hope none of its true though. 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

P.s Ive done about 7 now, I think, So im gunna go to sleep cause its 1:52 am here, And im very tired, So i will do the rest for you in the morning kay?