Calling out your name

by Claire   Jan 10, 2006


This poem got it's name was because well it's the first line of the poem so if yall have any suggestions on a title id apprectiate it.

Cry out your name
Hoping you'll hear
But all your fame
Drownding out my cries

I sit and wonder
How it would be
If it were different
And you were with me

I know it's lame
But still i wish
that it were the same
like way back when

then the thunder
pounds in my head
this storm like bluder
is making me insane

and yeah i know what yall are thinkin. this isn't very good or well you should cuz this one stinks but that's just me and i'm my worst critic

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Hey, nice job, don't be modest! Look people will eat you alive if you don't believe in yourself, NOBODY WILL! luckily you've got this steven kid here, and me to tell you otherwise =) But it was great. Also, thanks for commenting on my poem! And the first Cody, well he broke my heart it's a VERY long story, if you want to hear about it you can just e-mail me, but anyways thanks for the comment, I'm just returning the favor... Nice job though, honestly!

  • 18 years ago

    by Claire

    Thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Ray

    Don't be hard on yourself it is a very good peom. I know how you feel in this one.