Absolutely amazing poem.
With so much emotion and sadness, made me realise that there are many sugns and it just gave me something to think about.
Wow, so good, and so helpful.
keep up the good work mate
love Tara-Kay

This poem sent shivers down my spine
really , i can honestly one of the best ive read in a VERY long time. Such an important message is portrayed aswell...and it is filled with such emotion
beautiful
take care
all my love
em xxxxxxxxxxx

As you all probably can guess, I know the signs too...cause this poem is written about myself, I have live through all those signs....Just hope that all of you out there gets help before it's too late, like it is for me ='0(

Much Love Sabrina

Omg this poem was amazing! So emotional and sad! I give you 5/5*
Keep up the good work! ^_^

*~*serenity*~*

I'm glad you did get help, its weird that i would say that since i dont know you, but for all those that love you...great poem -xxxx-

Omg this is so good it brought tears to my eyes bcuz no one ever sees any of the signs, they do but they choose not to do anything about it, thats the worst part....its an awesome poem! keep up the great work ! hugs-hayley

Well done Sabrina, its a great poem, well written and emotional... its great.. x

Hey my good friend sabrina! I'm back and reading your poems. I'll read more later but i just want to say the poem is good and its clear to understand what you mean but i do hope you are ok. please let me know. All my love Amanda xxxx

This is sad, yet lovely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Another good poem, i like it, well written, did anything specifically inspire you to do this ? well if something did, sorry to hear that, but like i said, in time things will settle. keep up the good work.

Gave me chills in my blood. Great work its a note to everyone look for the signs that some1 is suffering or just tryong to call out for help...well thats the sign i got out of it. In the 7th stanza you might want to change the word 'wanted' to want just alittle insight.Great work

Take this poem and write my name all over it, in my blood. This is my story.

-Tainted Mikochan

Outstanding job, this poem is brilliantly written. It's full of so much emotion, it was so sad. Beautiful write.

Really well written and obviosly deeply thought about.

5/5