Wow thats a very good poem i know how you feel i've been down that road...if you need someone im here to talk to....plase read and comment on some of mine it means a lot to me thanx

andrea

The structure of ur poem really kinda conveys the lobneliness...feeling alll the emotions behind that, 5/5, keep going!!

Hey, great poem-thanks for the comments about mine. I can really relate, well done!

Hey thanks for the comment you left on mine..but this poem right here sounds like me too...i always feel like that! but if you wonna talk you can talk to me!! good job!

I liked it, I dont think it deserves the rating it has because I think it is way better! It had a very dark feel to it, which is kewl=)

Cool poem. great job! 5/5! wonderful!

Awe thats sad. i can relate. i like this alot

Wow ! i love the repetition... !!

5/5
love
amy

Again, such a sad and meaningful poem. I especially liked the repetition of the word Suffocation, it really brings out the meaning of the poem.

Peace. [Sole]