Comments : Paranoia

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Wow thats a very good poem i know how you feel i've been down that road...if you need someone im here to talk to....plase read and comment on some of mine it means a lot to me thanx

    andrea

  • 14 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    The structure of ur poem really kinda conveys the lobneliness...feeling alll the emotions behind that, 5/5, keep going!!

  • 14 years ago

    by *~Kelly~*

    Hey, great poem-thanks for the comments about mine. I can really relate, well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Nelle

    Hey thanks for the comment you left on mine..but this poem right here sounds like me too...i always feel like that! but if you wonna talk you can talk to me!! good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I liked it, I dont think it deserves the rating it has because I think it is way better! It had a very dark feel to it, which is kewl=)

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    Cool poem. great job! 5/5! wonderful!

  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe thats sad. i can relate. i like this alot

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow ! i love the repetition... !!

    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    Again, such a sad and meaningful poem. I especially liked the repetition of the word Suffocation, it really brings out the meaning of the poem.

    Peace. [Sole]