Never Ending Love

by MaSkEdSoUl   Jan 13, 2006


Out On The Beach,
Watching The Sunset,
In Each others Arms,
Kissing Each other Softly

Thinking Of The Future,
Wondering If We'd Last,
But Once I Look Into Your Beautiful Eyes,
I Know Right Then We'd Love Each other Forever And Ever.

My Feelings For You Are Uncontrollable.
Every time I See You,
I Want To Hold You,
To Feel The Warmth Of Your Body Next To Mine.

To Hear You Whisper "I Love You",
Makes Me The Happiest Girl Alive!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    It was really nice, I wish I had that. :( Good stuff. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    I really liked the ending and it was definitly one of your better poems....it didn't seem so blurty ....much better...

    ~Retniapdoolb~

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    How sweet
    cute poem
    keep it up
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    The flow seems a little choppy, but its very good. i really like it. one thing i would like to mention that could help the flow, is to start a new line at punctuation, and a new thought, or idea, like here..."Every time I See You I Want To Hold You," you have to ideaas, one is about seeing, and one is about holding, so you should start a new line like this "Every time I See You,
    I Want To Hold You." I hope that will help u. i gave u a 4/5, but this was still well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Black night

    Loved it, your are realy talented keep up the good work.

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