Final Prayer

by Emma   Jan 13, 2006


Little pain
simple game
to cut my sorrow away
faith as i try to pray
these sadden words
"try to teach me but i never learn
crying out with no one there
no one to hear
my silenced screams
all my dreams
Sliced and shattered
I am tired and battered
Giving up is what i pray
never to go the happy way
this ending tear
for all those who supposedly cared"
I pray this simple prayer
for i am beginning to wear
ending my life as i say this final prayer.

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  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    That was very well written great job

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Diz is a wonderful poem and i really love it and i felt the same way before but then suddenly my life got happy and all i do is smile...this is great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Im so sorry you hurt so much but ending you life is deff noth the answer.. life is full of pain but the happness is always somthing to look forward to.. keep your head up. nice poem tho

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very good poem, well written and ful of feeling

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job once again. I really enjoyed it and you had a good flow going on. Very sad though and it was very creative of knowing that when a commitied suicide there was a ending prayer. You usely don't read that in most suicidual poems. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

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