Comments : The Flame Will Burn Forever

  • Nice work...syner xx

  • 14 years ago

    by NeXuS

    This is a heartfelt poem and touched me deeply.

  • 14 years ago

    by Stash [Broken]

    This is really good. keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Straight passion with a sense of gratitude at the end great poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Samantha

    This was really great... You did a very nice job writing it and telling a story... I am very impressed... Please keep it up!


  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    I love this...great joB!

  • 14 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    It's so sad but so so good.......i love it and i love your name.LOL anyway sorry it took me a while to look at them...

  • 14 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    As all the truly great love poems are about...either lost love or hopeless love....ur poem fits into the lost love catagory...and guess's great. i mean it too. i really enjoyed readng this. thanks for making it possible. lol. (sounds like what some one would say at the Grammys) anyways. keep up the good work. hit me back. lata. -Leah

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    That was a good poem with lots of emotion, the only thing wrong is that line 3 and line 4 in stanza 7 should be spelled 'by' not 'bye' the former is the one you want. peace out and good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    So sweet - and so sad. I could relate to parts of the poem. Good work.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 14 years ago

    by LiL K

    I love this's like you're describing how much you love a girl..and then you explain how it's your fault that you lost her. Thats really inspiring to me...I love it! 5/5

    Thanks for commenting on my poems too!