Nice work...syner xx

This is a heartfelt poem and touched me deeply.

This is really good. keep it up

Straight passion with a sense of gratitude at the end great poem

This was really great... You did a very nice job writing it and telling a story... I am very impressed... Please keep it up!

sammie

I love this...great joB!

It's so sad but so so good.......i love it and i love your name.LOL anyway sorry it took me a while to look at them...
xoxo
Cassie

As all the truly great love poems are about...either lost love or hopeless love....ur poem fits into the lost love catagory...and guess what...it's great. i mean it too. i really enjoyed readng this. thanks for making it possible. lol. (sounds like what some one would say at the Grammys) anyways. keep up the good work. hit me back. lata. -Leah

That was a good poem with lots of emotion, the only thing wrong is that line 3 and line 4 in stanza 7 should be spelled 'by' not 'bye' the former is the one you want. peace out and good job

So sweet - and so sad. I could relate to parts of the poem. Good work.

Peace. [Sole]

I love this poem...it's like you're describing how much you love a girl..and then you explain how it's your fault that you lost her. Thats really inspiring to me...I love it! 5/5

Thanks for commenting on my poems too!