Simphony of the music

by unstated affinity   Jan 17, 2006


Reasonable words are sometimes said
as it is joined by a thread
i was left on fantasy
through the simphony of the music
such.. uncontrolable feeling..
sadness,hapiness........imagination,sensation..
no more thinking, no more saying
my soul on its way..
to an angelic journey
time are tightened and loosened
i do want to go....
into your place
into your breath
into your arms
brought you a milky twilight
unsaturated beauty
slowly flow within our heart
from mist to the dew

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Nice. i really like:
    Reasonable words are sometimes said
    as it is joined by a thread
    i was left on fantasy
    through the simphony of the music

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    There's so much said and so much left unsaid in your poems
    this is good!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Aww i like this one! good job!
    Take Care!

    CK

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I enjoyed reading this one. good rhyme and good choice of words.
    you did a great job.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wonderfull words, hun. I really liked the way you wrote this. So much creativity and it's beautifully unique. Keep up the excellent work!

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