Please Think

by Nearly but not quite   Jan 17, 2006


I know you want to do this,
But before you reach
The point of no return,
Please think about
What you're doing,
don't stay in this life for me,
Stay for yourself,
There's still so much here for you.
Please honey, it's not too late!
You're still this side of death!
Please think while you still can
Lay out a clear argument.
If you stop now you will prove you can,
If you have to be stopped
Imagine a life kept away
From anything dangerous.
Imagine constant counselling,
Imagine life in an asylum!
For God's sake Please STOP!
Please, my darling don't,
I love you, I promise
I won't let them take you away,
But please stop now before it's too late.

Please ccomment! I would appreciate any constructive criticism people have... praise is good too!

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  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This is really sad, but a great emotional poem, and a good message behind it. Thanks,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    ??? Waiting for what, anyway, I read it already, it's great! Now I want part 4!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Oh no no no its not i promise i have it im just waiting

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wicked! thanks Tabby!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Great poem part 3s a waitin chck it out

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