On My Own

Great poem! very emotional. it's cute too. it could do without all the "..." too. it'd still be just as strong. maybe a little stronger :) but you have talent. keep it rolling. keep up the good work!

All of this is to say...
Your kiss...
Your touch...
That little look you give...
Makes me want to live

Wow!

So lonely and sad, but beautifull written.

"Taking the moment...
Seizing the day...
Now I live for life"

^great stuff, nice rhymes and awesome flow. once question: why all the dots......?

haha, just leave it to me to ask a question.

One day Bill You'll find that precious love that will treasure you forever...this shows the loneliness within your heart...

love ya, Ann