I'm Now Immortal

by Allison   Jan 21, 2006


White faces surround me
Forever frozen in their eerie light
Darkness is around me
This is the path they walk in the night

Their thirst for blood controls them
They know not what they do
It drives them to do horrible things
And not always follow whats true

As they come upon me
I do not shed a tear
For they can't see through me
I won't show them my fear

They hold me in their tight embrace
Then give my the kiss of death
They whisper secrets in my ear
As I'm getting ready to take my last breath

But what they do next surprises me
They give me the gift of life
I am now immortal
No longer dealing with my strife

The next night I walk with them
Travel this ending land
For now I am one of them
Sitting at their right hand

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Sometimes i just wish all the pain would go away...but, that's one wish, and a great wish, i think everyone can wish for.

    big hugs,
    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    Great idea, I love it. Very well written, excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent topic, great beginning and perfect ending

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. i'm not too good with titals and this is a difficult one to name. but the poem is brilliant

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    How about WALKING WITH WHITE FACES just an idea

    very good poem i love it i got into it which is something that usually does not happen

    5/5

    love always
    tabby