Hey darl. a t0uching piece. l0t 0f em0ti0ns in this. very heartfelt g0od j0b 0n it.

l0ve always d0ra
**x00o00x**

Very very good i love it it is so good!!!!
such strong words i love it excellent poem 5/5

tabby

Thanx a million for the comments

much love tabby

Aww this is so sad, yet true, "Don't try to understand
The relationship we have created
The blade is my way to breathe
No matter how much I hate it" i LOVE that verse, it is soo descripitive and beautiful you are very talented keep up the fantastic work hun

I lovvvvvvve love love this poemmm...wow...it kinda relates to my past...well i saw dat u called me today...i wassss soooo pissed...but call me tomorrow...cuz i gotta talk to u asap

God what a sad sad poem, made me cry...I can relate to almost all of it. I am so sorry about your grandfather, I can't believe that any one would do that, we live in a sick world!!! I was raped once, he took my innocene too....I am so sorry for all that has happened to you, wish that I could help you get better. I am going through the same thing, with cutting and all....Hope that you are okay!!

Much Love Sabrina

That is so amazing.. you are a phenomenal writer- keep up the great work!!

Wow!! This is amazing i loved evryone i have been through some what the same thing and you are a survivor to a nightmare!! You are awsome i really liked your poem.
*Sweet_Princess*

Yeah this is good, because it is real and is your story hun. It takes a lot of courage to write a poem like this. Great job hunni!

-Tainted Mikochan

I don't know how you could let your MOM read that..

I know I do it too and cover up lies that I am scared to tell my mother; I could NEVER let her know.

This is a great poem. Keep up the great work.

GREAT POEM. VERY DEEP INDEED.

FELT IT IN MY BONES!

GOD BLESS!

Wow hey wassup i think that was a really really good poem i liked it a lot even though i havent gone through that i can understand how u feel keep doin a good job 5/5
much luv
yahaira
aka
yari

Wow..this is really good.you should be proud.
[broken]
Stassja

Aww x such a great poem x

This really is an amazing poem...it reminds me of many things...it was beautiful. keep it up. you really got something here

Omg, this is really, really amazing, i just can only hope to be as good as you someday, i give you a 5/5

I LOVE IT I WOULD GIVE IT A 20/10 IT WAS AWSOME CHECK OUT MINE THERE KINDA AS SAD AS URZ! UR GREAT AND IMA KEEP IN TOUCH WITH UR POEMS!!!!

I am speechless, it's too good for words
keep up the good work

Hey hun love the poem, going through the same thing myself... tryna give it up though. It's so hard but knowing others are feeling the same helps... hang in there.
Much love,

~ ~ Beka ~ ~ xoxo