Fatal Attraction

by Cueball24   Jan 23, 2006


Long moonlit brown hair flowing majestically in the midnight breeze.
Her soft glowing sinful smile has brave men on their knees.
Forever lost and abandoned deep in the beauty of her eyes.
Never in my sorrow filled tragic life have I heard so many sighs.
Screams shouts of continuous torture arise from her endless rejection.
Devilishly menacingly stealing my heart achieving ultimate perfection.
Wondering aimlessly in my flesh covered body hoping to steal one glance.
There she is my beautiful magnificent goddess oh what a chance.
Asking whispering pleading for perhaps maybe a dinner date.
Building dramatically heavy suspense over my sole fate.
Kissing victoriously passionately your vanilla stained lips deep.
Grateful miraculous affection for you I am yours to keep.

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  • 17 years ago

    by AwakeInDreamin

    Great poem i enjoyed it keep up the great work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Hey Andrew!
    I really loved your poem!! Your a much better writer than me! lol i'm voting 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Awesome write...you are very talented. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. I write in the same style. I would luv it if you checked out more of mine and let me know what you think...I am interested in improving. Thanx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    What can i say? it just seemed so passionate!!! i really enjoyed it well done 5/5 =)

  • 18 years ago

    by confused!! (Jenn)

    Great poem i liked it a lot good Job
    Keep it up!!