A girl said to a boy...(part 2 of a boy said to a girl)

by Bethan   Jan 23, 2006


A girl said to a boy ''I'm sorry'
The boy said 'What for?'
The fact you didn't believe me
Or that you don't love me anymore?'

The girl said that's a lie I love you, I really do.'
The boy replied 'Prove it; show me that it's true.'
The girl said 'I can't show you, love isn't like that,
But I've missed you so much and I really want you back.'

The boy answered 'you asked me to show you my love
Well, I felt that you were a gift sent from above,
You brightened my day and made me feel blessed,
And you took my heart with you the day that you left.'

He continued through his tears
'why did you leave me?
Did you think that I was being too needy?'
She said 'No I thought you were saying I love you to use me,
To get what you want and then abuse me.'

She says now sobbing 'I thought you'd play with my emotions,
That you were serious wasn't even a notion,
And I still don't believe that you loved me before,
I had to leave for you to see what others saw,

She carries on 'I'm worth a lot more than you realised at the time,
Stood by you and no-one like me will you find
But you know that now don't you, now I'm no longer there,
To tell you I love you, to worry, to care.'

It was then that the girl understood,
I don't want you back,
It's love that I need
and it's love that you lack,'

'I'm sorry for leading you on
But I was right you don't love me,
so I'll have to move on,
I'm sorry if I hurt you in any way,
But with your lies and your issues,
I really can't stay.'

The boy now crying uncontrollably said,
'I hate you; you're leaving me just like the rest,
I'm sorry I didn't love you enough, or the best,
I tried but now you're gone, and telling me to move on,

'But it's you that I want' he said, 'you and only you,
I love you is meant when i know that i do.
Just please, stay and listen , it won't take long,'
But when he looked up she'd already gone.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I love how you tell stories. I really like too that you use long sentences when writing. Mine are often short...but I've got a couple like yours. Good job! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    This was SO good :) Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    W0w great use 0f w0rds in this 0ne/. very beautifully written. t0uching heartfelt very well written. great j0b darl

    l0ve always d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I can't even express what i'm feeling. this was bloody amaing. im actually shaking, it was so good. so powerful, so creative, so passionate, so intelligent and so much more. i can't believe it. this was written wonderfully. the words flowed and were arranged brilliantly. i don't know how you did it but i'm glad you did. i'm still in a state of wonderment astonishment, i truly am. i loved it to the absolute end. i loved the first part, but this one blew it out of the water by far. so in short, to sum up my feelings towards this masterpiece...WOW! just WOW!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Charles

    I enjoyed this poem a lot.
    the two characters seemed real, and i felt that they both loved eachother, just not as much. gr8 poem.