Pain is more then a cut

Really good poem, and I can understand what you're going through. Although I'm not a teenager anymore, I can tell you adults go through the same thing. Take it from someone who's been there, done that, and still walking into the mess.

I think this poem was flat, basically dead, even though the message was clear and the flow is decent. I'm not trying to be harsh I just think you could go deep and find the right descriptions and emotions to bring this poem to life. I rather not lie with those one liners like the person above me. You don't learn by that.

I liked this one, I can really relate...keep up teh good work and hold on
xox
Kristen

Very good, well written with a flawless flow. the last stanza is brilliant and very strong.

5/5