This is a brilliant poem keep writing take care hun sarah x

If this happened to you, I understand what it feels like. The same thing happened to me except it was with my brother...

good poem

Great job i loved it!! 5/5

THIS POME IS OS GOOD I FEEL YHE PANII WANT TO CRY

Aww thats a hart-breaking ending
i do hope this isent you butif it is hope things get better =]
Great work keep it up =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxx

I really like it.

That was very deep and shocking. I look for surpises in poems, or should i say irony. things like this happens everyday and it's nice to see someone expressing them.

Wow!! that was some piece of art!
i luv art! i luv da way dat builds up hun its awesome!
xx

Wow! i really loved this poem...i can't say that i relate to it but it really moved me...the ending was pretty sad but over all good write 5/5 keep it up!
x!x zoe x!x

This is absolutely amazing. i loved it. you are an incredible writer.

This is absolutely amazing. i loved it. you are an incredible writer.