Dreamy Brown Eyes

by AnAstAciA   Jan 24, 2006


What can I do?
What can I Say?
Days are passing
and i feel so drifted away

I see a girl
I see a boy
and with not knowing
I played you like a toy

Time will take away
the pain
But all all I know now is
I am totally drain

Why I let you go?
Why I let you leave?
Just like the yellow leaves
scattered to the autumn's winds

How stupid I Was
How fool Could I Be
that let you walk
far away from me

You were good
You were nice
Why I haven't saw that
in your Dreamy Brown Eyes????????

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  • 19 years ago

    by Crimson Moon

    Thanx for your comment :)
    I like this poem...especially this part:
    "Why I let you go?
    Why I let you leave?
    Just like the yellow leaves
    scattered to the autumn's winds

    How stupid I Was
    How fool Could I Be
    that let you walk
    far away from me"
    you did a great job ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Awww! I loved it!! I felt the same way a couple weeks back! hopefully things will be okay 4 ya!! Keep writing! like your work!!

    CK

  • 19 years ago

    by rar

    Good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Dreamer

    Nice poem.. keep it up! good luck!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kim

    Thanks for the comment :) I liked this poem, some of the grammar through me off but it was lovely!!! Good work!

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