Emma,

Amazing poem, I really hope your alright tho, the last line has me worried, im here for you hunny.

Pom wise I think this is the best ive seen you write hunny, I love it:

I stare at the muddled words written on the page
Absent minded, I tap my pen as I try hard to engage,
Watching the clock as it happily ticks, for me it will not wait
My wandering mind floats softly into a delusional state.

Well done hunny, keep it up and hope your okay=)

Love Jenn

Awe...its so real...when you read it.

My God, Woman! How are you so good?! You are seriously the best writer on this site. Deffinitely. That poem is very good, I really felt it and understood what you were trying to say...Progress with stopping is still going good for me, last night i started to do it but as soon as i touched the blade to my wrist i remembered all of the people i would be letting down and i started to cry harder. I'm really proud of myself though, for not going through with it. I want to thank you for the support you've given me too. You're a gem (lol, i don't know if that's just an Aussie syaing but my teacher said it today and i couldn't stop laughing; it means you're great, lol)...But yeah, I love your poem..s...I love them all, lol

Dont worry emma, ur not the only person that feels like that, my friends mum died the year she was doingher gcse's, my aunts mum died when she was taking her degree, my friends best friend committed suicide during her nursing exams...ur not theonly one going thru pain, dont worry. Really nicely written!!!

On rereading mycomment i think maybe u will take offence, i didnt meanit offensively i was just trying to tell u that u werent alone, ireslly liked thepoem!

Ok,lol, thanku katie, i admit i did get a bit worried... glad u liked it tho :) thanku every1, i luv u guys!
xxxx

HAMMER i am commenting, tis a great poem and you aren't alone, especially not tomorrow when you become my fellow sainsburys...companion. oh holy heck yes... i better not swear any more, or i'll get KICKED OFF though admittedly i did bad, i'm sowwy *sobs* WHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYY? oh yeah anyway... let us dance on the radiator

i'm NOT on drugs... drugs are no goodses (in accent) i love you hammer, you have good leg :D

I miss commenting/talking to you, but I have no time now. I'll comment on Saturday.

Matt...I'm Sorry!

Your writing is always so beautiful, tugging on the heart strings the way nothing else can. I commend you because whether your poems are happy or sad you express it in such a way that the readers (including myself) are amazed and dumbfounded by your ability to write so wonderfully. Incredible poem here, girl. Take care.

Mary

I love it soo powerful and emotional based on real feelings i hope ur ok stay strong and keep up the good writing!
love alwyz
X-Fallen Angel-X

Omg hun i really l0ve this poem its s0o g0od i n0 h0w y0o feel....im here 4 y0o

Yo...i feel like ive been down on u but...yeh, like dat gurl sed, ur not theonly 1 who feels like dat. U seem 2 hav sum followin here, huh. Ur own lil court of admirers.

That was soooo good, I can so relate to it, wish I couldn't I guess, but 5/5 my dear! Oh and thank you for your comments on my poems!
Luv Helen xxx

I love this poem, I can relate so much to it. Its beautifully written like all of your others. Deserves nothing but a 5/5. Keep writing and take care.

With love,

*> : PainOfOne. blaine

So u dnt like ma poems, no? chek out ma new 1s, theyre beta

Great poem, I can really relate to it. Fantastically written and deffinitly a 5/5

Great job!

Chelsey