Torn

by RainbowDemon RogueDoll   Jan 25, 2006


Theres a gurl in my mirror
theres tears streaming down her face
an image is in the mirror behind her
a boys face is there
she turns to face him
he reaches out and wipes away her tears
away... go away she manages to choke out
he looks at her out of the sad hollows that his eyes have become
she turns away and feels his hand on her shoulder
giving into him she turns back to face him
slowly moving towards him she suddenly stops and looks into the mirror again
and behind her she hears him murmur...
theres a girl in my mirror
crying tonight
depressingly
theres nothing i can do to make her feel alright...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jeffrey

    ! strong stuff !

    I can relate, I been in that boy's shoes before. I never know when to stop trying either, it's near impossible for me to just walk away from a girl like that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I liked this one, it gave good ideas on how the girl is feeling in the poem. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Good One Girl...Kinda reminds me of my guy friend who tries his hardest to help me..Very Nice...Joc

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