Wow brill poem i liked the way it ended

"You might keep it all inside
So that we might not even know
That you too have scars to hide
But yours do not show"

5/5

Oh cutting would feel soooo good right now, sigh. The joys of withdrawl are so "fun." Hope you kicking the habbit too.

-Tainted Mikochan

Its beautiful
you totally ended it amazingly
keep it up gal and good luck ;)
hope you're okay :)

Amazing dear. I know exactly what you mean, great job..!-xxx-

Awww. hun hope you're ok and i know exactly how u feel. U keep ur chin up and smile 4 me. Lv ya 2 bits luv manda xx

Wow, this is amazing, i love reading your work ! this is my favorite verse because its true
So that we might not even know
That you too have scars to hide
But yours do not show
you do such a great job of expressing yourself ! keep up the awesome work ! hugs-hayley

Great poem you an awesome writer i mean it
keep writing so i can keep reading your work
love always
abby

I think that the ending is really good on this poem. It shows that everyone has diffrent ways of showing their pain. It was a beautiful poem and you are really talented. Keep it up. *5/5*

~Alyson~

Oh my....I usually don't approve of such poem, but this is excellent.

The way you end this is perfect, I wouldn't have changed a thing.

Wish I can give you a critique, but why fprce one out when I like it just the way it is?

~Atomic

That was a great poem. i loved it. so much feeling in every word. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

This poem was a great one it really shows the sadness in it. i used to cut my wrist when i had problems and i kind of do it still but i'm coming out from it. hope you can come out from it too. if you can check out my poems they also talk about me and all my life.

Awe such a sad poem!! yes the ending was a little abrupt but it was fine! I'm not a fan of cutting poems very much but i loved the flow you used! Very nice job!

I think that the ending you have fits perfectly, maybe you think it's not finished, but i think it's great! awsum poem! luv em

I love it. the last 2 stanza are my favorite. and i love the end and how it ends.

Why don't you let the reader decide, that way, they can choose the ending to to what they have read.

I feel the same way and i love this

Absolutely superb. come rate mine?

I am completly lost for words this is by far the best poem that I have read on this subject I love the part...
love those small long cuts
And the once that are really deep
It makes me sick to my guts
That I love to watch myself bleed
It's and its very, very sad and I feel the Exact same way.
I'm getting worse though its hard to tell if I can make it through the week withought going to deep on purpose. I hope you arent that bad I realize that you probably dont like the idea of talking to stangers but if you can't get a hold of anybody you can talk to me. Hold on and I'll do the same.
Every Minutes a Struggle...
Jen

WOW! thats amazing. know the feelign exactly. nothing worse then when people judge on for something they don't even understand.
no need to be sorry about not kow how to end the poem, i thought it was fine the way it was!

Sad but beautifully written
i can totaly relate to this one....
kudos
thank you for sharing