Wow, so powerfully written! Great job, I can completely relate! Excellent write!

Real good i love the way you repeat the first sentence of each stanza
it added a good touch to it
Take care
HS

Hey there heather! how are you? am so glad you decided to return :) this is absolutely wonderful...I look forward to reading more

keep up the good work!

I don't know about the whole cliche thing, but the ending is awesome! Truly a superb piece of poetry! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Hey heather. a t0uching piece. beautifully written. i liked the structure. very heartfelt. keep up the great w0rk

l0ve always d0ra
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HEATHER!!!! You are back to posting!!! YES!!! WOW I HAVE MISSED YOU GIRL WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?!!

After a while of not reading your work I'm floored by this new peice...WOW! You always leave your readers with their jaws dropped....This sentence "I wrote your name on a bullet" EXCELLENT! I loved that it gave me goosebumps..I am so sad to know you are sad my dear...These aren't want I wanted to read from your new peices (sadness), but I do love your style..I hope your ok Heather and hope you can push through all this pain!
With Love
Chels

Heather
Another beautiful write, I never expect nothing less. Great job as always...

love ya, Ann

Very nice. Very meaningfull...Very powerful. The emotions in this poem are very very strong.

Wow very well written, you really made the way u felt show well done keep up the good work

This is sad but good.

I like it. and i don't think it's cliche.

Thank you so much for your kind words,
VERY much so appreciated.
I absolutely LOVED this poem.
You use words that are so deep and i just love it.
~Wings

Thank you so much for your comment. It meant a lot to me reading it. I'm glad your back to posting poems. They're one of a kind for sure.

With love,

*> : PainOfOne - blaine

I liked it, relationships can make you feel bad cant they. Nice poem xx

Amazing!
I LOVE it!
great job!
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That was great. I have been there.

Good JOB!