Comments : I Wanted To Show You That I Love You

  • 15 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, so powerfully written! Great job, I can completely relate! Excellent write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Real good i love the way you repeat the first sentence of each stanza
    it added a good touch to it
    Take care
    HS

  • 15 years ago

    by JJ

    Hey there heather! how are you? am so glad you decided to return :) this is absolutely wonderful...I look forward to reading more

    keep up the good work!

  • 15 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I don't know about the whole cliche thing, but the ending is awesome! Truly a superb piece of poetry! Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Hey heather. a t0uching piece. beautifully written. i liked the structure. very heartfelt. keep up the great w0rk

    l0ve always d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 15 years ago

    by Chelsey

    HEATHER!!!! You are back to posting!!! YES!!! WOW I HAVE MISSED YOU GIRL WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?!!

    After a while of not reading your work I'm floored by this new peice...WOW! You always leave your readers with their jaws dropped....This sentence "I wrote your name on a bullet" EXCELLENT! I loved that it gave me goosebumps..I am so sad to know you are sad my dear...These aren't want I wanted to read from your new peices (sadness), but I do love your style..I hope your ok Heather and hope you can push through all this pain!
    With Love
    Chels

  • 15 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather
    Another beautiful write, I never expect nothing less. Great job as always...

    love ya, Ann

  • 15 years ago

    by no

    Very nice. Very meaningfull...Very powerful. The emotions in this poem are very very strong.

  • 15 years ago

    by Elise

    Wow very well written, you really made the way u felt show well done keep up the good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    This is sad but good.

  • 15 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    I like it. and i don't think it's cliche.

  • 15 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Thank you so much for your kind words,
    VERY much so appreciated.
    I absolutely LOVED this poem.
    You use words that are so deep and i just love it.
    ~Wings

  • 15 years ago

    by Solace

    Thank you so much for your comment. It meant a lot to me reading it. I'm glad your back to posting poems. They're one of a kind for sure.

    With love,

    *> : PainOfOne - blaine

  • 15 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    I liked it, relationships can make you feel bad cant they. Nice poem xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephy

    Amazing!
    I LOVE it!
    great job!
    -xxx-

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    by limp

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  • 15 years ago

    by melanie

    That was great. I have been there.

  • 15 years ago

    by Donald Guillen

    Good JOB!