Broken

by Lucy Lewin   Jan 27, 2006


Broken dreams,
Broken hearts,
My whole life,
Has fallen apart.

Broken promises,
Broken love,
It won't take,
Just a shove.

Broken Lives,
Broken Smiles,
You know I would've walked,
Millions of miles.

Broken dreams,
Broken hearts,
I don't know,
Where I should start.

©Lucy

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  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Great poem nice flow 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Leah

    Hey this is excellent. i'm just gunna leave you with a tip. all that matters is the ending. keep that in perception while writing. keep it up. love leah xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Awesome poem hun! thanks for the comment, it means so much :D stay strong and take care,
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by cali

    That is really good, i love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    I like it, keep writing.

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