Empty Promises.

by xDryTearsx   Jan 27, 2006


Empty Promises
Fill a void
All the trust you built
Uncaringly destroyed

You lied and cheated
And broke my heart
I should have pushed you away
From the very start

I was too naive
To see behind your eyes
I was the only one
To fall for your disguise

But now I know
It`s your loss not mine
I was more then you deserved
And without you I`ll be fine

You`re everything that`s nothing
A coward in cloak
When it comes to love
You`re the one to choke

You hide behind your games
And pretend you really feel
But you have no idea
Which feelings are for real

Is it in your blood
To lie and deceive
Is it instinct to prey on every girl
To wear her heart on her sleeve

You better watch your back
Because there will be day
When every girl you come across
Will see the games you play

Stop trying to make
All girls your own
Because you`re the one
To end up alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was good, it was so deep and powerful
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    "Empty Promises
    Fill a void
    All the trust you built
    Uncaringly destroyed"

    You are one with words and I don't know how you put them together like this so that they have such an impact on your readers. This is indeed a quite angry yet sad poem and from that very first stanza you had me hooked!

    I'm off to read some more...keep writing!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is great! 5/5 Good job =]

    luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    I can really feel your pain and relate to this is so many ways..nicely done on the wording ..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Love the whole things...specialyl "you're the one who'll ned up alone." greeat jobb. 5/5!

    Lissa