One little slit...

by amy   Jan 27, 2006


Holding my wrists in pain
letting myself go again and again
sliding this blade against my skin
ecnoring the fact i\'m comitting a sin
it feels so right but yet so wrong
i\'ve been building up pain for so very long
i thought it wouls be simple to just quite
but everytime, i say just one more slit
one turns into two, and two into three
this is my cry for help, my lonley plea
All of this pain
inside my veins
looking for a place to flow
all bottled up with nowhere to go
i need this blade, it\'s my relife
but some way or another it always gives me grief
i want to stop cutting really i do
if you only understood, if u only knew
this true pain within
my little sin
one little slit
is how it all begins...

i wouldn't do anything like this, but i know there are people out there who turn to this method to relieve pain, i have a close friend who results to this, and i tried putting my self in this position and this was the poem i had came up with. anyone out there who is in this position, please comment, i would like to know if my poems reflect you feelings...please let me know what you think...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    WONDERFUL!!! Truly brilliant! I literally have tears in my eyes because that is exactly how I feel - I want to stop but just can't do it! You are an absolutely amazing writer to be able to put yourself in that position and write so wonderfully about it when you don't actually do it!
    Seriously it was amazing!! 100/5!!

    Amy xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by .::BrokenHrt::.

    Gr8 poem...i can relate to that sadly...but yeh 5/5

    -LiSa

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Great poem! It was amazing. I feel a lot like that sometimes. I used to be a cutter badly, I used to cut every day but now I don't really do it anymore unless I can't take the stress anymore. But great job and keep up the good work! 5/5 :D

  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    I think you did a wonderful job on this. i used to be a cutter and you expressed what i felt beautifully. i really admire you for trying to put yourself in your friend's position, you certainly did a good job of it in my opinion.

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