Summer Storm

by Allison   Jan 29, 2006


(I decided to try something new (to make mother happy) so I wrote this. Please read it and tell me what you think)

I walk to the window
And sit on the floor
I look outside
Watching the rain pour

It looks so peaceful
So silent and still
I watch the rain fall
And land on the windowsill

Each little drop
Makes its own little sound
They drip, splash, and fall
On to the warm summer ground

I step out the door
I walk in the rain
The lightning cuts through the sky
Like a mark of pain

The shower turns violent
Thunder now booms
I run for the door
Heading straight for my room

I stoke up the fire
So cozy and warm
I gaze out the window
At the dangerous storm

The wind starts to howl
The lightning flashes
I cover my ears
As the thunder crashes

The power flickers
The lights go out
Light from the fire
Help me to move about

I hope to myself
The storm will soon end
The lightning abides
Quickly becoming my friend

The lights flicker on
The end as arrived
The storm as subsided
I HAVE SURVIVED!

*Please tell me what you think. I always return the favor.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful nature piece you have written here. Wonderful use of words and imagery. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    This was cool!! i liked it alot. well done, yet again!

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good! I loved it. You are very talented. 5/5** keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was cool lol I hate storms lol there so scary :P But i loved this one aswell. Jeez im loving all your work =] 5/5

    luv natalie x-x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Nice i liked it a bit more a a happy poem than your others but still a grat job! yeah but this flowed well and created great images in my mind!!!!!!!!
    ALLYxx