In debt

by Clonjey   Jan 30, 2006


I'm trying to use my life before I have to refund it.
What I noticed is that happiness is NOT abundant.
I'm going to get my life right, no matter how long this takes,
so I just might learn to forget my own mistakes.
I was always lion like safari.
Forgive my dishonesty.. I'm sorry.
There...I said it.
Please take my life on credit.
Amen.

© 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    This poem is wicked cool, its very metaphorical. i like metaphors and similes. theyre great to put in poems. also- i like the fact that you expressed the feeling of(what i see as) plain determination, with no care or regards to what happens around you, but in the end showed that you Do care. its really cool, the one thing i don't like is the lion thing... it doesn't fir, i think you could have used a better metaphor...

    xoxo

    Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Lizette*~

    I like this one alot tooo

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