Who Are You?

by xCezx   Jan 30, 2006


So there I was just lying on the bed,
I looked up and saw you there,
I said "hello", but you didn't reply,
I asked who you were but again you didn't answer,
I looked at you up and down,
You were sitting on a bed,
the same as me,
You had the same kind of top and the same jeans,
Your hair was the same colour brown as mine and just below your elbow exactly like me.
I asked your name,
You just sat there confused,
I looked you up and down once more,
You just stayed still and silent,
peaceful though scared,
I looked into your eyes,
The keys to your soul,
I was searching for answers but so were you,
I wanted to know who you were, so did you,
Then as I gazed into your hazel eyes,
It dawned on me,
I knew who you were,
I should have known it all along,
Though I'm sad to say it...
You were me...
You were my reflection...
The broken girl I saw in front of me...
Was my shattered soul...

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  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    I like this i do this many times look in themorrior and wander who that person is

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    5/5....very well writin i like it heaps.....its shows u wrked hard on this to show the rite emotion. keep it up....hope ur ok. :)

    takecare
    ~HUGS~
    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Sad poem... Nicely written. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    I loved it, i had a dream like that once too, woke up crying and it scared the hell out of me. im still not sure why... well 5/5 good work ~ash

  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    It was very beautiful....i can totally relate to this cause i had a dream like this once....very good keep it up 5/5
    *If you want check mine and tell me what you think:) Thanks!
    Love
    AnAstAciA