When You Say...Nothing...

by christina marie   Jan 30, 2006


You sit in silence, I sit in silence,
Your silence kills me so...
And you're always getting up and leaving,
When I beg you not to go...

You walk away, and don't look back,
Still you're silent in leaving,
Please don't go, just stay with me,
You left and I stopped breathing.

You're still walking, now at the door,
All I hear is a click,
I'm crying on my hands and my knees,
I know that this is it.

The door shut close and now you're gone,
And you're never coming back.
Once my heart was whole with you,
Now it's breaking...and cracked.

But now that it is shattered,
And in the dark I fall,
It hurts so much when you had left,
And when you said nothing at all...

(C) Christina Hurley.
01-30-2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by ~*JESSiE*~

    Wow!!!!i can totaly relate to this poem!!!!! it is great!!!! 5/5!!!

    xoxo
    JESSiE

  • Wow. that was really good.
    Ad i know just how you feel!!! like you said to me. you are my perfect split side!!
    Lots of Love♥
    teenage tragedy♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    I loved that...It wasnt very long, but with the way you write, it doesnt have to be! Great job sweety!! You're so talented:D

    ~Always4You~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow! you're a great writer! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Wow i really like this one good job i can really feel the emotion well done :D xxALLYxx