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  • 14 years ago

    by sarah

    Hey liked your poems I hope you dont really think about doing that my mum killed herself just think of the things you leave behind.

  • 14 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I Luved Your Poem...Itz Nice That Your Finally Moving On Cuz Like They Say:
    No Matter What...We Must Move On
    Ow And Thanx For Your Wonderful Comment On My Poem!!
    Luv,
    *LuvYou2Death*

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    You are learning man :) you always got me lol
    anyways good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Always4You

    Hey great job! I love the way its written...keep up the good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowDemon RogueDoll

    Wow!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Excellent, finally a poem of hope!
    I loved how you started the poem with the bad things and showed how you are learning.
    I loved how the poem gained hope, and wasn't the un original sad poem.

    Well done, im happy you are moving on =]

    Keep it up.x

  • 14 years ago

    by cassandra

    Hmm...surprising...i actually liked it! to start out sad and then end on a happy note was something unexpected

  • 14 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    This is definitely a 5/5 poem. I can relate to this poem and was glad to see that although it started of really sad it ended with hope. Great job

  • 14 years ago

    by shannon

    Beautiful..very nice you are a gifted writter..5/5

    thanks
    take care
    shannon

  • 14 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    That was really good! i felt like that before. great poem 5/5
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 14 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Your poems are all beautiful, but this poem was truly breath taking. i love how your poems all give so much insparation.

    TaKe CaRE,,

    LoTa LoVeN,,

    T!FF@N!

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOW!!! Excellent poem. I love it... I'm putting you on my fav's list!!!

    Great poet. I look forward to reading more of your poems! 5/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Loved the injection of hope at the end. Moving on ... to be free. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by J Lau

    Good job! Love the context of the poem itself. If I may suggest, breaking the poem up into stanzes and the overall presentation will enhance the flow of your poem. That's my own opinion of course. Great write though... 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sondos

    Brilliant! The flow is great. The way you've set it out indicates the almost brokenness in the writing and it works very well. The last two lines are my favourite

    Well Done
    Sondos

  • 14 years ago

    by Sondos

    Brilliant! The flow is great. The way you've set it out indicates the almost brokenness in the writing and it works very well. The last two lines are my favourite

    Well Done
    Sondos

  • 14 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    A bit simple maybe, but you had a bloody brillant concept! There are way too many poems about killing and suicide, so it is always refreshing to read one that doesn't end that way. Life hands us a lot of pain, but we can pull through and that was the message I was able to get from your poem. Nice write!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 14 years ago

    by holly

    Wow thats a really touching poem seriously it almost made me cry youve put it so simply so sweetly im glad theres a happy ending well done xxALLYxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice, really touching :) Keep up the good work.

    Peace.

  • 14 years ago

    by Naima

    That was really good! Wow! I can relate with the situation in which you were put in. Wow! Well, it does get better over time, So keep that In mind! You are really good! Keep it up! Naima