Hey liked your poems I hope you dont really think about doing that my mum killed herself just think of the things you leave behind.

I Luved Your Poem...Itz Nice That Your Finally Moving On Cuz Like They Say:
No Matter What...We Must Move On
Ow And Thanx For Your Wonderful Comment On My Poem!!
Luv,
*LuvYou2Death*

You are learning man :) you always got me lol
anyways good job

Hey great job! I love the way its written...keep up the good work!

Wow!!!

Excellent, finally a poem of hope!
I loved how you started the poem with the bad things and showed how you are learning.
I loved how the poem gained hope, and wasn't the un original sad poem.

Well done, im happy you are moving on =]

Keep it up.x

Hmm...surprising...i actually liked it! to start out sad and then end on a happy note was something unexpected

This is definitely a 5/5 poem. I can relate to this poem and was glad to see that although it started of really sad it ended with hope. Great job

Beautiful..very nice you are a gifted writter..5/5

thanks
take care
shannon

That was really good! i felt like that before. great poem 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Your poems are all beautiful, but this poem was truly breath taking. i love how your poems all give so much insparation.

TaKe CaRE,,

LoTa LoVeN,,

T!FF@N!

WOW!!! Excellent poem. I love it... I'm putting you on my fav's list!!!

Great poet. I look forward to reading more of your poems! 5/5!

Loved the injection of hope at the end. Moving on ... to be free. :)

Good job! Love the context of the poem itself. If I may suggest, breaking the poem up into stanzes and the overall presentation will enhance the flow of your poem. That's my own opinion of course. Great write though... 5/5

Brilliant! The flow is great. The way you've set it out indicates the almost brokenness in the writing and it works very well. The last two lines are my favourite

Well Done
Sondos

Brilliant! The flow is great. The way you've set it out indicates the almost brokenness in the writing and it works very well. The last two lines are my favourite

Well Done
Sondos

A bit simple maybe, but you had a bloody brillant concept! There are way too many poems about killing and suicide, so it is always refreshing to read one that doesn't end that way. Life hands us a lot of pain, but we can pull through and that was the message I was able to get from your poem. Nice write!

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow thats a really touching poem seriously it almost made me cry youve put it so simply so sweetly im glad theres a happy ending well done xxALLYxx

Nice, really touching :) Keep up the good work.

Peace.

That was really good! Wow! I can relate with the situation in which you were put in. Wow! Well, it does get better over time, So keep that In mind! You are really good! Keep it up! Naima