Cold, Sharp, Razor

by jazmin   Feb 1, 2006


Cold, sharp, razor,
slicing across my wrists,
cold, sharp, razor,
give one last kiss,
cold, sharp, razor,
take my pain away,
cold, sharp, razor,
Make this all just fade away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Cold sharp razor,
    time to go away
    cold sharp razor
    you may not stay
    Cold sharp razor
    flee now from my view
    cold sharp razor
    she is over you
    cold sharp razor
    go haunt another home
    cold sharp razor
    this girl is no longer alone.

    Whenever the razor stretches,
    its arms out to you,
    remember I am here instead,
    to help you pull through.
    Razors are not friendly,
    no, instead they bite.
    Please let me be there for you,
    to help you in your fight.

    Hey baby, this is my response to your poem. It is not really good, but it has the message I want it to say. Cutting is not a solution to anything, and niether is suicide, my personal experience says other wise. I have been downt that road and by some miracle I am still alive. If you want a hand towards freedom, I am here to help you. Email: tainted_freedom_from_sanity.

    I have written a lot of poems about this like of stuff that might be helpful: Suicide though someone else's eyes, Leaving me Behind, Sorry is never enough, and Because I love you to name a few.

    -Tainted Mikochan