With out You

by Amadeous   Feb 1, 2006


Sometimes i sit and think how it would

be, if you were sitting , here, next to

me. Me holding you so tight, stroking

your hair, here in the starie night. But

life without you is no life at all. Life

without you is not the life I want to live.

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  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Hi, gd poem but u might wanna seperate lines so they're easier to read, just a suggestion and maybe right a bit more and with more feeling. it can do miracles to ur work. 4/5 please dont take offence

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Hi, gd poem but u might wanna seperate lines so they're easier to read, just a suggestion and maybe right a bit more and with more feeling. it can do miracles to ur work. 4/5 please dont take offence

  • 18 years ago

    by bouncy

    Yo that was sweet n cute.keep it up. n thanx 4 the ratings on my poem.w/luv *bouncy*

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