As beautiful as a rose

by Katey   Feb 3, 2006


You are as strong as an ox,
As fast as a jaguar,
As cute as can be,
and,
As beautiful as a rose.

Your eyes are as bright as the sun,
As deep as the sea,
As brown as chocolate,
and,
As beautiful as a rose.

Your hair is as soft as silk,
As long as lions main,
As wavy as the ocean,
and,
As beautiful as a rose.

Your voice is as soft as a rabbits tail,
As mysterious as a black rose,
As calm as a clam,
and,
As beautiful as a rose.

You are as beautiful as a rose!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Wow, this poem gave me butterflies! It was so beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hijinx

    Katey,
    Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem. I really enjoyed reading some of yours, this is one on my favorites. You should consider submitting it into a contest. Private message me and I will give you the contest website, the grand prize is money. Very nice poem, I loved it! Take care.
    Luv,
    Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Other reason than*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    The only suggestion I have is to change this one line:

    "As mysterious as a black rose"

    And I suggest that for no other reason you already are saying "beautiful as a rose".

    I truly enjoyed this poem, great job.
    ~Jaime

  • 18 years ago

    by Cueball24

    WOW!! IT'S AMAZING!! Nice poem.

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