Bill,
My friend...that was such a great poem. Your poetry's always beautiful and powerful... you're great! Well done, keep it up and thanks for sharing ^_^ hugs.

You're such a great writer. I loved the ending lines, it just brought the poem such a significance. Good job :)

Bill,

You always seem to come up with something amazing each time you write something new. Another masterpiece.

Best regards,

Steve

I agree with Brandy, these lines are awesome!
"letting others see you as the one
Helping to make them feel whole"
Beautifully written poem with a wonderful inspiring message! Love it!

Your words always "capture" like only you can do. Luv it!

Inspirational in so many ways, Bill! I'm beginning to believe that being the ever nice girl has its perks.

"Live each day as if it is our last."

Since I don't do that, that line kind of hit home, but I'm certaintly inspired to start. Brilliant write!

So true my friend, such an inspiring write. Beautiful...

love Ann

This is truly wonderful and so inspirational!! A remarkable job you have done on this poem. It is deep and contains a wonderful, realistic message!

This is a really good poem!!! With a great message to it, I enjoyed reading it, weldone!!

Great one Bill! this si a wonderful message to wake up with and carry through the day, everyday!

you might want to check a correction in the 4th line of the 2nd stanza.

thanks for the message!
shobhana

Your poems are so inspiring! we all should read this. an outstanding job, once again

Nicely done Bill, great penn!!!

A really beautiful message, I agree with JJ, I think there are a lot of people out there who would benefit from considering a similar philosophy. Really stunning ideas and it flows wonderfully too!

Bill, I really like this poem. I feel the same way about life. Very touching, ditto on the feelings! Let me know what you think about my work.
Thank You

Really like the poem..Its great!