Wo0o0ow gal that was amazing
bgad such a wonderful poem
I love how you show up with new ideas
gurl thats the way you rule ;)
lov ya
Nema x0x0x0x0x

Very touching and sad, I loved it. keep up the good work.

-Josiah

You got skillz. 5/5 Perfect flow and and word choice. =)

Beautiful..amazing..great 5/5 i loved great job

thanks for sharing
take care

shannon

This one is so perfect, i can feel related to it too. ur a very talented writer i always like checking out ur poems

pili

Aww wow.. this is so sad but i loved every minute of it. it is so well written and the story is just amazing.. keep it up hun

sammie

Wow, I really enjoyed this poem because it had progression, which really makes a poem and it also had a story line. You image of the candles was wonderful and you did a great job keeping it going throughout the whole poem. Love is the most powerful human emotion and yet at the same time the most complicated. A wonderful poem hunni, I could really feel the girl first in love and then her heart broken. Nice job.

-Tainted Mikochan

U noe wut am reading it once more
I just LOVE IT
you're one of the gr8est poets after all
keep it up gal U ROCK

Awesome poem.....very well written, i love the candle idea.
"time flies by so fast
in candlelight glow
and every second is worth
more that you could ever know"

The ideas here are so simple yet amazingly effective. I love the last stanza. The images are so fresh and new.

All the Best
Sondos

This is a very good poem. again, it flowed beautifully (most of the time, anyway) my favorite part was the last 2 stanzas. 5/5 you're a very good writer. keep it up.

I love the use of metaphors in poetry, and that was a darn good one. It's a bit of a longer poem, but I was hoked right up to the last stanza. Again, your last stanza was probably my favourite, because it brought the whole poem together. Awesome job.

Wow, This is really powerfull. Your really talented! I loved this poem. It was so sad. Keep it up =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Another astonishing poem, i adored it :) it's so sad but amazingly written :)
i liked this stanza :
eyes full of words
stories unspoken, left untold
we promised forever
till we both grew old

and the last one :)

~StefQ

This poem is so beautiful
the struture is really good and well thought out.
such a sad touching story though

great read

**smile**

I felt my heart move a little towards the end. Made me feel a lil sad but it was very well written. Keep it up.

Its a very touching poem...nd it reminds me of some1...keep the good work :)