Comments : In Candlelight Glow

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Wo0o0ow gal that was amazing
    bgad such a wonderful poem
    I love how you show up with new ideas
    gurl thats the way you rule ;)
    lov ya
    Nema x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Very touching and sad, I loved it. keep up the good work.

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    You got skillz. 5/5 Perfect flow and and word choice. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Beautiful..amazing..great 5/5 i loved great job

    thanks for sharing
    take care

    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    This one is so perfect, i can feel related to it too. ur a very talented writer i always like checking out ur poems

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Aww wow.. this is so sad but i loved every minute of it. it is so well written and the story is just amazing.. keep it up hun

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, I really enjoyed this poem because it had progression, which really makes a poem and it also had a story line. You image of the candles was wonderful and you did a great job keeping it going throughout the whole poem. Love is the most powerful human emotion and yet at the same time the most complicated. A wonderful poem hunni, I could really feel the girl first in love and then her heart broken. Nice job.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    U noe wut am reading it once more
    I just LOVE IT
    you're one of the gr8est poets after all
    keep it up gal U ROCK

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Awesome poem.....very well written, i love the candle idea.
    "time flies by so fast
    in candlelight glow
    and every second is worth
    more that you could ever know"

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    The ideas here are so simple yet amazingly effective. I love the last stanza. The images are so fresh and new.

    All the Best
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by yasmin

    This is a very good poem. again, it flowed beautifully (most of the time, anyway) my favorite part was the last 2 stanzas. 5/5 you're a very good writer. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    I love the use of metaphors in poetry, and that was a darn good one. It's a bit of a longer poem, but I was hoked right up to the last stanza. Again, your last stanza was probably my favourite, because it brought the whole poem together. Awesome job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, This is really powerfull. Your really talented! I loved this poem. It was so sad. Keep it up =] 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 17 years ago

    by StefQ

    Another astonishing poem, i adored it :) it's so sad but amazingly written :)
    i liked this stanza :
    eyes full of words
    stories unspoken, left untold
    we promised forever
    till we both grew old

    and the last one :)

    ~StefQ

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    This poem is so beautiful
    the struture is really good and well thought out.
    such a sad touching story though

    great read

    **smile**

  • 17 years ago

    by Tru

    I felt my heart move a little towards the end. Made me feel a lil sad but it was very well written. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Soul

    Its a very touching poem...nd it reminds me of some1...keep the good work :)