This is incredible! This poem is so me. I love it. What did you mean by making the fromt page, anway?

Wonderful penn, great job!!!

Yes dear...i understand every word here and i bet that i m the only one who understands so deeply.
ur poems just flow so smooth an dits like i can read them with closed eyes...as its my heart that has to do the job.

just loved it
great work
all the best and take care

I really like your poem...I can related to it...sorta sounds like the pathetic me.

I love this poem. I found it a few days ago and had to go though the pages to find it again.5/5

I loved reading this. I loved the skies reference.. don't know why particularly but still =) well done! amazing. I also give 5/5.

I really enjoyed reading this....very good poem....i love the whole idea and feeling in it.....i especially like the part when you say
'She's the happy charm
everyone wants to be around
But no one sees her lonely nights
And the tears of a clown'
The pictures it put in my head were so real cuz you made it so easy to imagine...good write....thanks
*feel free to read some of mine---im fairy new here but submitting pretty often