Dead Before The Hospital...

by LossxOfxControl   Feb 8, 2006


“You all know that I love you
More than words can ever explain
But this life is not for me
I’m feeling more and more pain

When I’m in heaven
I’ll be watching you all
Pretend I didn’t die
Pretend I didn’t take that fall

So please forgive
Make sure you keep that smile
I’ll keep a watch out
And I’ll see you in a short while

I’ll tell you why
I’m gonna’ do what I’m about to do
But always, always remember
It wasn’t anything to do with you

Ever since she died
I’ve always been so upset
There’s always been something missing
I can’t deal with it and this is how she felt I bet

But I wanted you to know
Apart from the whole in my heart
I’ve always felt you’re love for me
But after she died it just tore me apart”

I hope you understand
And forgive me
But I just can’t help this anymore
I wanna’ live in heaven and be free

He found her lying in blood
With that note beside her head
He took her in his arms and felt for a pulse
And just what he’d though she wasn’t yet dead

He read the note
And wondered what he should do
He hoped she’d forgive him for this
But he couldn’t loose her yet, ‘I love you’

He called the ambulance
And they came right away
Maybe it was meant to be because
She was dead before she got to the hospital anyway

It's not very good, I know it's not...but I'd really, really like it if you could please comment and vote.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nina Star

    :'( awww
    i like it
    keep it up:)

  • 18 years ago

    by santanna

    Awwh tis very gd keep it up n see u in school lol u got talent