Hey, great poem, I honestly don't know what to say, and I was just getting good at commenting. AHH. It was wonderful, the rhymes, the flow, and yeah, just wonderful. I love the way you word all your poems, it's fantastic, all I can say is keep up the good work,

Wow! awesome!
amazing job dear. i loved it.....5/5
wanna read 2nd part too.

take care
Bharti

Welcome back dear and what a way to come back.
ur poems are always amazing..so deep so meaningful...so touchy.

great work dear

stay strong & take care of urself
5/5

Wow sweety, I love this poem. It's so true, I love the mid part especially, with the over used knife, and shedding tears in bed, wonderful written.

Absolutely loved it. Glad you are back with two new poems =) I'll get a cup of coffee and read the other one. Loved this one, hope to read part 2 soon.

Thank you very much for your comment by the way, you should know it means a lot to me. Especially because I really look up to you. You are amazing.

Love you! -xxx-

Oh.my.god. anna this poem is sooo amazing!!!!!!! its soo sad tho. i'm really sorry that your homelife is like this. but your right it doesn't havta be the end. i can't wait to read part 2!!!! lyl~lex

Aw hun im so glad ur writing again and this is so touching and beautiful and sad too thanks for this beautiful piece of art, keep on writing xxoo

Hey darl. i havent sp0ken t0 u in a while h0pe ur d0ing 0hk. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece. deep n t0uching. keep it up!

l0ve always d0ra

Awsomw poem anna, please try to stop harming urself i wish u could stop..drinking, cutting taking pills doesn't take the pain away
thinking of u love u heaps
kate xoxox

Very good writing girl. Sad story, but written good. and you are right, it does not have to be the end...

Tim

Wow great poem i loved it and i missed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey babez, diz p0em iz s0o k0ol ican t0tally relate...i dont have internet but im at sk0ol right n0w, imiss y0o s0 much, iwish y0o were here!! when i can call y0o i will....luv y0o l0tz

In every single household, there is a huge problem. its such a sad thing that there is no such thing as perfect. you portray this beautiful with such expressive words that capture this sad moment. i hope everyone would join together to take action as you lead.

Cool. Part 2 please!

Lv A, xx

Ohhh hun that was really great I love reading your poems your so great and with such deep emotion. I know sometimes family can be such a pain, i'm dealing with it too but i'm sure ur's is worse then mine but just hang there hun. xoxo Rach