Death over tha phone

by you come in this world alone in you leav alone   Feb 10, 2006


Tha telephone rings n tha girl picks up n she says hey baby whats up
he says i gotta tell u somthin n u might not understand
baby what r u talkin about
listen i gotta leave
what do u mean tell me pleas
i gotta go my time has come i cant deal with this life its makin me numb i think its time 4 me 2 go baby understand that i do love u
n she says baby don\'t go i need u
he says i have 2 go its my fate my time has come its 2 late
he takes a gun n puts it 2 his head
n says baby its this life i hate
she says no n he says goodbye n pulls tha trigger she screams n down tha drain went there dreams
what caused him 2 take his life
y didn\'t he try 2 fight
she new he was hurtin but not that bad not enof 2 take a gun n put a bullet throw his head
now on tha floor is were he lies covered n blood because know one heard his cries, tha end of tha phone is silent but she dosent put it down n shes still screamin his name sayin pick up tha phone now
little did she know thats how he lived his whole life never ever makin a sound

pleas comment n tell me what think it would mean alot thanks

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahs death angel

    You're poems are awesome! you're a fantastic writer.. good job 5/5
    -sarah-

  • 17 years ago

    by Rayarra Jones

    Great job. That was a really great poem even though it was quite sad also. I understand it cuz at my school we had like 4 suicides during my time there and those were some of the people you would never expect to do something like that becuz they seemed jus fine. Well keep doin what you do

  • 17 years ago

    by Torey Hafford

    Damn thats hella sad girl why you write somethin like that? well holla lata aiight peace

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tite

    Yo sometin like dis happen befoe to 1 of my homeboys. 3 of my homies got murdered and he put a rope round his nek b/c of it. It waz sad but stupid. Dere waz no reason he shouldve done dat. NE way u write poemz I can relate 2. I like dat. Keep up da good work.

    Stay Playa,
    SC

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Wonderful poem...sad but it's a reality; people committ suicide a lot & it's truly sad...It's an amazing poem...I like how you used silence on the phone as a symbol of his life...Def. 5/5!
    -Amanda

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