Pain I Feel Inside

by Nici   Feb 10, 2006


I would like to tell you that I know how you feel - but I can't because I only know the pain I feel inside

To say that things will get better probably won't help - all I can promise is that I'll be by your side

If only I could wipe the tears from your eyes - but I can't because mine are overflowing too

It's impossible to erase all the evil in your world - all I can promise is that I'll fight it with you

*This is a short verse that I wrote to go inside a sympathy card for my Mother after her Dad - my Grandad - died this week.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    You've got a lot about him, amazing though, i love all the ones i've read so far..great job. 5/5 !props!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Its short but says a lot. very good peice.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Aww that was very cute and very good.. i loved it..5/5

    maybe if you ever have the time could you please read Tragedy Took Over..it means alot to me..

    thanks for sharing
    take care
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    This is a very sweet thing to say, i'm sure that your mother will love it. Great writing!