If only...

by unstated affinity   Feb 11, 2006


If only the sea stop roaring
and the grass loss its colour
will this world be the same..?
enormous skies and mountains,stay unframed

if only the snow can say
and the wind can sing
will they lend me a secret...
another aspect of this life..

if only the time can stop
for a day.....
for a second....
let me seek for the feeling,
the untouched dream
that drown with the night,
simply hidden and broken

if only there is no hate and sadness
things blessed by love and joyfullness
without expressive comment
without pretending moment
i do want to fly, through the dark ,through the clouds
to draw... the beauty of soul...

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  • 19 years ago

    by PS

    Wow this is beautiful. every line seems thought out to have the greatest affect which it does. i love it

  • 19 years ago

    by Sole

    Such a beautiful poem, like ^^ I loved the section,

    if only the snow can say
    and the wind can sing
    will they lend me a secret...

    So beautiful, paints such a lovely picture. Really well written - thanks.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 19 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Hey, this is beautiful!

    if only the snow can say
    and the wind can sing
    will they lend me a secret...
    another aspect of this life..

    this line is beuatifully written; the whole poem is wonderfully expressed.

    thanks a lot for your comments on my work!

    look forward to reading more of yours

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 19 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    BEAUTIFUL, NICE, FANTASTIC :D
    -Mia-

  • 19 years ago

    by J Lau

    Great work.. I like the peaceful and calming mood you painted... forcing different perspective on things... bringing out the hope of innocence and purity in humanity. Keep up the great work... I see talent in you... keep writing. 5/5

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