Good poem. It went really well together.
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Well for a venting poem it's pretty amazing. I love it. It's fantastic!!

Beautifully written.

MShadowsWhisper

Awesome poem hun a lot of effort must have gone into it i wish i could give it more than a 5 xxxx

Wow, that was really good, considering it wasn't meant to rhyme, it came out as a awesome read, i like it, keep writing

I really like this poem! You are a really good writer.. and I say that honestly.. to be able to rhyme and not even know it? haha thats awesome..
Keep on writing!

WOw... cool poem...u got a awesome rythme going on. keep writing

I'm the same, and this poem seems much more than just a 'venting' poem.

''What's the correct way to behave?''

What i hate the most is that i cant seem to focus on anything else other than this, no motivation for anything.
It Sucks.

But your poem is just, good to read. If that makes sense...

Lv A, x

What a great poem, i've read a few of your poems and this one stuck out the most. such great meaning and very well written. not surprised it's a strong 5. keep it up huni. xx

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i liked this poem, it was quite long but still you captured my attention and held it really well. Its got a great rhyme scheme. An excellent read! Keep it up! xx

I didnt mind the length at all as the story held my attention throughout. There is strength and beauty in your words and the structure is created to make an easy flow. Great job!