My Broken Home

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Feb 13, 2006


Upstairs in my room
I'm crying on the bed
parents down stairs fighting
their voices ringing in my head

loudly the swear words blare
I hear my father yell
then my Mother's reply
'go to f*.*ing hell'

this is what my life's like
from upstairs in my room
this pain is about to kill me
thoughts of impending doom

I lie about my family
to almost all my friends
cause I know all but a few
will be there for me til the end

downstairs the fists are pounding
chairs are getting thrown
in my room I'm thinking
about how I'm so alone..

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might be part of poem.....might not be...

my father threatens to leave
man I wish he would
my sisters crying louder
I wish you all understood

this is what I go through
and why I'm on my own
so now you know the reason
why I'm so terribly alone

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Thanks Sluvious For THe Help!!!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that the extra bit should be part of the poem. It would be good with or with out it. I really liked this poem. It is a good piece of work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Yeah, I think that one part would be a perfect ending. This poem is sad. There is so much emotion and pain that shows when I read this. Keep up the good work hunn. You are a very talented writer.

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    This is such a powerful poem. I can relate to it. I love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by DeAnna

    This is such amazing writing. it sounds exactly like my house. i love the reality in this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like this poem, it's rather sad and what not but it was well written.