Be my Valentine??

by Blutonium Boy   Feb 14, 2006


I ask you now what is a valentine?
Has it really changed since I was nine?
To grab all your feelings and let them shine?
Please tell me how it is defined...

Is it defined as a simple kiss?
Or maybe this feeling of total bliss?
The way you sweep me off my feet?
Or these words of passion, oh so sweet?

I don't think you can answer my question,
So I'm just going to make a little confession,
I want you to be my valentine,
As long as that means it is divine.

So come with me on this magical day,
I open my heart, so come and stay,
I want you now like I will forever,
Let us rewrite our new endeavor,

Come with me, we'll start anew,
And forget all of which we have been through
Valentines Day was made for two,
Or was it made for me and you?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted By You

    Its sweet and really good

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    You definitely have a way with rhyming.

    Though your poems are usually rhyming like so:

    A
    A
    B
    B
    C
    C
    D
    D

    I usually prefer those that rhymes like:

    A
    B
    A
    B
    C
    D
    C
    D

    Maybe you should write one like so, just a suggestion.

    About the poem itself, I love it. Exacept for the last sentence in the last stanza.

    "Or was it made for me and you?"

    I liked how you ended it, but maybe it's the way you worded it with the "Or" that threw me off.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by dijah

    That was a great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Gretchen

    HAHAHA good job I liked the flow and the rhyming

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