A Broken Friendship

by Rae   Feb 15, 2006


My frienship with you is broken

There were harsh words spoken

We were hurt at first

But, now it's even worst

You not wanting to be my friend

that is what I need to amend

I try so hard

I even give you cards

everyday I ask for forgiveness

But you reject me with rudeness

I know what I did was wrong

With you is where I belong

I miss the laughs and jokes

Even your folks

I just hope in the end

that we will become friends again

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  • 16 years ago

    by MARI

    That poem was soo goood i can so relate except in my case we will never be friends ther is no chance:( keep writting ur soo good!!!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shavaughn

    That was a great poem. i know how you feel cuz im going through the same sitution i hate it al i want is me and my ex friend to be friends a again. keep up with the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessie

    I sooooo love your poem! It's written with such emotion, I've had a friendship end like that. But you know what? If your friend doesn't forgive you then she must not be a good friend at all. Keep up the good work! :-)

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