Hey dear,
I can also relate to yours, its wonderful, i guess we're feeling the same...I don't know what to say other than I loved it i hope you're okay...thanks for the great comments by the way, its great to know you,re always there....luv ya-xxx-

Great poem sweetie.
I can relate so much, frankly i think a lot of us can, you wrote that fantastically.
nice to see you writing again.
Take care xooxxo

Well written, flows very well and seems to all fit together so well thoughout.

5/5

This is so amazing! I can relate so well to this. Perfect rhyming, perfect rhythm...just perfect!

Awe Mona this is so depressing. But thats a good thing. That's right girl, just get it all out. I feel the same way. Your writing is ALWAYS amazing

Very nice, Mona. Excellent! rock on honey!!

So sad, but very well written! I love the rhyme, it was amazing. And the flow was very smooth, great job!

Wow hun..i know ive already commented but that blew me away once again.
This is just a short note to tell you how much i appreciate your comments..they seriously made me smile and feel acknowledged.
I was going to send u an email..but i dont know yours, so if u'd like, get in touch with me ok!?
i hope you're ok..thanks again.. so much
love u lots xoxo

So many people can relate to this
great write sweetie
well done
lovies xxxx

Kirstys right its a good one too relate to
It feels so....helpless
and thats what makes it so sad
brilliant poem hunny
mwah keep it up
xxxxxxxxxxx

Heya Mona!!
WOW!!!! amazing poem. Every poem written from your heart is amazing...and i can feel it each time. keep up the great work hunnie
Rosie xXx

I loved your poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

This poem is great. I like it alot. The imagery is great, what I believe to be the meaning is great, the flow, the format, the diction, is all great.

Good job.

I think the only stanza that seems out of place from the flow and the format
Is this one:

I have carried all this weight upon my shoulder
While my heart gets older and my breath gets colder
I have always tried to be kind
And still everyone thinks I'm just out of my mind
It got a little lengthy.