Hearts unfolding

by speachless01   Feb 15, 2006


Heart's unfolding,
Body's shaking.
My world came down,
When truth became awakening.
Since, I've only frowned,
Actions still breathe-taking.

Never hungry or thirsty,
'Cause none are pleasing.
With out what we had,
Heart's forever bleeding.

I beg the lord,
To make me stop loving the,
Then perhaps leaving,
Would be easier on me.
Everything's so confusing.
Why can't this be a comedy,
Your lies so abusing,
Please fill me with bravery.

How could love,
Give me such a malady,
But your lies and deceit,
Put everything in jeopardy.
It hurts so much,
Just to be in this quandary,
You dispossessed my heart,
All causing a tragedy.

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  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    A brilliant piece of work that serves as a breath of fresh air from the over-cliche, blotchy, 'teenage poetry' that is so often clogging the world of beautiful writing. excellent piece, a solid 5/5. i wouldn't change a thing.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful sad poem you penned here, simply but well express emotions.... hope everything well with you, take care...and thanks for your nice comment on my stuff, much appreciated.....bert ~

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