Blowing me away i love it!!!!

Touching, heart melting write!! Really enjoyed it... the flow was wonderful!

Great poem Bill.... that was pretty amazing.I love it ^_^ hugs 5/5

Touching...Simply beautiful

*hugs and smiles*
Mary

The imagery you have used is truly amazing.

These lines are simply out of the world:
"Change blows through my life with hurricane force
Knocking my world asunder, crashing through the windows of my soul"

such a beautiful way to describe the inevitable winds of change!

great one!
shobhana

WOW!........ no wrds need to b said

Love your poem.plz check out mine n rate thm also.ttyl c-ya

I wish I could write as good as you do
you have a great gift from God

Bad homie g dont rush ur poems like that. that reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeked!!!!!

Lovely Bill, a wonderful love penn!!!