A Different View

by daniel   Feb 19, 2006


Here we are again,
In this all too familiar place,
In these all too familiar clothes.
But this time,
It was all too sudden,
A victim of a crime.
Family lining up,
One by one,
Children arranging flowers in a basket.
And you,
Standing there with a smile on your face,
Remembering good times,
And shedding a tear,
For the bad.
Oh how the funeral changed,
When I viewed it from the casket.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Wow... ANOTHER good, short, to the point poem. and i loved the last few lines... it took me a minute but i got it.

    another 5/5
    -Allanah

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    How sad......
    it was really good
    i had to read it twice to completly undrstand.......................
    i liked it though
    awesome
    ~HazE

  • 19 years ago

    by Meaghan

    Wow that is really good. I love how it seems so normal and then at the end it just turns to this sad place. It is really hard to write good sad poetry and you did it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow this poem is really good. its sad. i like how you can make it this good with little words. hey thanx for the comment, it was greatly appreciated. 5/5
    lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by ~me~

    Hey
    great poem!
    short but sweet
    and i like the ending
    mexx

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