I would have never of thought

by ashley   Feb 20, 2006


When i hear you signed papers
it hurt really bad
it felt like you were giving me away

I would have never of thought...
i would move away
to return another day

I would never of thought...
I would ask my dad to see my mom
it doesn't feel right that way

I would never of thought...
I would cry over missing you
but I am today

I would never of thought...
I would miss arguing with you
but that day is today

I would never of thought...
I would be writing
a poem about that day

This one took me a really long time because its about my mom and I, and i wanted it to be perfect and i actually cried making this one. So please give some feedback it doesnt even have to be good just tell me what you think of it. And i will give you a comment.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HEATHER

    I love that poem it made me cry i gave you a 5/5 :-}

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I love the thought of the poem. I bet your mom loved it. But to mean it could have had more meaning if it rhymed but that's me. I still liked it. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Wow...that is all i can say!! well written....keep it up